words.IELTS EXAMINER COMMENTS

characterize your response as “well-developed, with relevant, extended and supported ideas. Correctly, you did not try to discuss too many reasons for the problem you focused on two important reasons in paragraph 2].
+ Coherence and cohesion:
As always, you provided a well-organized essay. The logical paragraph structure is supported by precise topic sentences and clearly identified arguments. Sentences were well-linked.
+ Lexical resource:
There is some excellent vocabulary too Increasing levels of poverty and rising
wealth inequalities impact on the economic growth of a country and the security of
its citizens the poor may turn to crimes such as drug trafficking, prostitution,
robbery and violent attacks on others….
+ Grammatical range and accuracy:
As with lexis, this area of your writing is strong. There is no problem with the range of grammar structures, which included a second conditional sentence, relative clauses and the consistently correct use of modal auxiliary verbs

TASK 2 WRITING LANGUAGE
CAUTIOUS LANGUAGE
When do we use therefore When we use cause and effect
For example it’s very cold. Therefore, I put my jacket on.
The ticket was very expensive. Therefore/so, I had saved money for many months.
You are showing a relationship.
Something causes something else. Therefore, I think a personal opinion)
Something that is a cause
Therefore
, there is a fact.
Clear signals
It cannot be denied that/moreover/also/meanwhile/nevertheless/I am of
the opinion that.
If you want to make a statement/claim that you are harder to prove it wrong, you need to make a weaker statement
For example email
may
cause extra work and stress. I’m not saying it does, because if it does, it’s a fact….so be cautious.

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