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The Norton Anthology of EnglishLiterature (NE2; 2928). In my experience, the clearest and most thorough text for writers is a book intended for aspiring readers . . . of poetry, which seems a
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very strong place for us all to start Paul Fussell’s
Poetic Meter and Poetic Form(
1979
).
Free verseThere is nothing free about free verse. It will not liberate a country or open a prison, and to write in free verse well is often harder than writing in form.
The free in free verse refers to the freedom from fixed patterns of metre and rhyme, but writers of free verse use poetic devices like alliteration, figures of speech and imagery. As James Fenton puts it:
Free verse seemed democratic because it
offered freedom of access towriters. And those who disdained free verse would always be open to accusations of elitism . . . Open form was like common ground on which all might graze their cattle – it was not to be closed in by usurping landlords . . . But if the land looks overgrazed, one should feel free to move on Unfamiliarity breeds contempt. Any ingrained antagonism to form in poetry is usually an indicator that the poet hasn’t read very much poetry. Free verse has along history, and is as ancient as Anglo-Saxon verse. To move on, let me say that free verse can
be written quite brilliantly, but I would argue that good free verse is harder to write than good formal verse. At best there should be no sense of a disjunction between the old shapes and the new, or apparently new.
Fenton also points out that DH. Lawrence stands out as a practitioner whose unmetred poetry was clearly better than his metred poems (see NP There is a no-man’s land between where his poems stop and where his prose begins. For examples to imitate, read Snake (see NP 1286) and ‘Bavarian
Gentians’:
Reach me a gentian, give me a torch!
let
me guide myself with the blue, forked torch of this flower down the darker and darker stairs, where blue is darkened on blueness even where Persephone goes, just now, from the frosted September to the sightless realm where darkness is awake upon the dark . . NP 1291)
SyllabicsYou can try writing in syllabics right now by creating a haiku – a three-line poem of seventeen syllables in which the syllable count of the lines is five–seven–five.
Read this poem by the author about a bird called a ‘Redpoll’:
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if she had spilt from cherries, from holly, from a shake of nightshade.
The line break between line two and line three shakes the nightshade-bush of the poem as the bird flies from it. Haiku are small open spaces for precise, often resonant, observation. Syllabics as a whole area means to organise your lines of poetry by using a strict number of syllables in a constant and continuing pattern. It is a means to organise a poem into being. The found poem
The European Larch in ChapterFive uses syllabics. Rhyme can be used with subtlety, as in the syllabic masterpieces of Marianne Moore (see NP:
1328).
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