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Creative writingWe will look
at found poetry in ChapterEight
. You are encouraged to take what you can from other writers, but the argument here is that you should also take what you can from other
non-literary writers, whether they are scientists,
architects or even businesspeople.
Precision and voiceThe right names and terms give your writing greater power and show you have done your work. Precise language wakes or rewakes the world and replicates it more immediately than a film ever could. Moreover, clarity finds its equal in simplicity – the hardest skill fora writer to master. The other property in writing that comes out of precision, clarity and simplicity is a natural sound or voice to the writing (Raymond Carver and Robert Frost are exemplary in this respect. The ear of the writer becomes unmuffled, and the language carries that quality too
in doing so it feels natural, it feels
of the world rather than an artifice made
from the world. As an example for possible imitation, read this extract from
A Cold Spring by ElizabethBishop:
The infant oak-leaves swung through the sober oak.
Song-sparrows were wound up for the summer . . Now, from the thick grass, the fireflies begin to rise:
up, then down, then up again:
lit on the ascending flight,
drifting simultaneously to the same height exactly like the bubbles in champagne.
(Bishop,
1979
: Swung through the sober oak. Song-sparrows were wound up for summer. Fireflies lit on the ascending flight The trained field
biologist in me wants to shout, Exactly and then discover what the same height for fireflies is. Alert, evocative, precise writing of this standard is not too far from the best observational nature writing, or writing that arises from scientific inquiry. Obviously, an ethologist would not reach for the simile of exactly like the bubbles in champagne while
writing a scientific paper, but they might were they writing a popular nonfictional book on the life of fireflies. You may wish to learn this precision, too by observing the world,
and making translations from the natural world into your own creative writing.