English for Research: Usage, Style, and Grammar



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A.Wallwork - English for Research Usage, Style, and Grammar - 2013
10.4
ambiguity with passive
Some journals insist that you do not use the personal pronoun we . This means that instead of writing we did x (active, you have to write x was
done (passive. Unfortunately, the passive form does not tell the reader with 100% certainty who performed the action. If you use the passive to talk about something which is commonly referred to in the literature, then it will help the reader if you use a word or expression that indicates that this is common knowledge.
YES
POSSIBLY AMBIGUOUS
1 Children are conditioned by their parents [1, 7, 9]. Thus it is
generally assumed that children in orphanages will … Children are conditioned by their parents [1, 7, 9]. Thus it is assumed that children in orphanages will …
generally indicates that this is an assumption made in the literature and not specifically by the authors of this paper It is impossible to understand who has made or is making the assumption.
1 Children are conditioned by their parents [1, 7, 9]. It is well known
that children who have been abandoned by their parents will …
it is well known clarifies that this is not just the author’s viewpoint.


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10.4 ambiguity with passive (cont.)
If you are talking about the literature and you use the passive both to refer to your own work and that in the literature, then the reader will have difficulty distinguishing between the two. There are various devices that are essential to avoid such confusion. Use the names of authors preferably within the main sentence and use the active form. The problem with only using the reference without the name of the author, is that the reader is forced to check to see in the bibliography whether the reference refers to you or to another author.
3. Although some journals dislike we , they don’t seem to have problems with our ! So one good way to avoid possible misunderstanding is to use expressions such as our results show, in our work, in our study . Using such expressions is vital when you are constantly switching from talking about the literature to talking about your work.
4. Be careful when using expressions such as in a previous work – it must be very clear that you are talking about your own previous work, rather than the previous work of an author you have just mentioned.

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