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The delicious sweet shop down the road is owned by me, Mrs Pratchett. I am the hardworking lady who spends hours selling succulent sweets and looking after my beautiful shop. I am writing this letter to while I am in a furious rage. I am writing this letter to you because I have shocking news to tell you, shocking news that will blow your head off!!

Last Tuesday while I was sweeping my shop and clearing all the footprints off the floor, a group of disrespectful teenagers trotted into my store. Then……..

In my humble opinion these boys need to be hit several times with a long metal cane! I suggest I come in to show you those mischievous monkeys…