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Precise Language


Krystal is writing a research paper on the Harlem Renaissance. This is her first draft.

     (1) The beginning and end of the Harlem Renaissance are always argued about by a lot of people, but people do not argue about the movement’s importance to everyone who loves art, music, dance, literature, and theater. (2) Social sciences like philosophy, sociology, and historiography also experienced growth during the Harlem Renaissance. (3) The movement had a major impact on people throughout the Diaspora, or people of African descent spread throughout the world. (4) Afro-Caribbean artists were influenced and many black artists from colonies living in Paris who spoke French were also influenced by the Harlem Renaissance.


     (5) Part of the reason why the Harlem Renaissance happened was because of things like people moving to the city to work in factories. (6) They called the movement of people from the South and rural areas to cities in the North the Great Migration. (7) Harlem became a center for the black middle class in New York City. (8) The freedom from racially-motivated social and intellectual constraints of the South helped make Harlem for many. (9) The culture of Harlem helped artists work better and make more art.
     (10) Claude McKay’s Harlem Shadows, Jean Toomer’s Cane, and Jessie Fauset’s Confusion all showed different aspects of African American life and helped to develop an audience for more literature. (11) Claude McKay, Jean Toomer, and Jessie Fauset all made it easier for new up and coming writers like Langston Hughes, Zora Neale Hurston, Nella Larsen and others. (12) Alain Locke, often called the Father of the Harlem Renaissance, James Weldon Johnson, and W.E.B. DuBois were some of the foremost thinkers and intellectuals in the movement. (13) Important visual artists included Romare Bearden, Lois Mailou Jones, and William H. Johnson.

43. What is the most precise way to write sentence 8 from the passage?

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For a new freedom from racially-motivated social and intellectual constraints, many folks moved to Harlem.




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B.

The freedom Harlem offered for many from the racially-motivated and intellectual constraints of the South.




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C.

Harlem offered a freedom from the racially-motivated social and intellectual constraints of the South.




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D.

Harlem had the racially-motivated social and intellectual constraints of many southern cities and towns.



Precise Language


44. What is the most precise way to revise sentence 1?

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Although people dispute the Harlem Renaissance's beginning and ending, they never argue about its impact on art, music, dance literature, and theater in the United States and abroad in the Caribbean and cities like Paris.




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The beginning and end of the Harlem Renaissance are always argued about by a lot of people, but people do not argue about the movement's importance to everyone who loves art, music, dance, literature, and theater.




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C.

People argue about when the Harlem Renaissance began and ended but not how much people liked the music and art.




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D.

Although people dispute the Harlem Renaissance's beginning and end, they never argue about its impact on the arts.



Effectiveness of Structure


History of Hybrid Cars

     Would you believe the history of hybrid cars goes all the way back to the 1800s? And that the gas-powered cars most of us still use today weren’t mass-produced until the 1900s? In 1839, a Scottish man named Robert Anderson built the first electric car. A few decades later, in 1870, Sir David Salomon developed a car that had a very light electric motor, but its batteries were very heavy. As a result, the car moved very slowly and could not go very far.


     In England, an electric taxicab was introduced in 1886. It had a battery that had 28 cells and a small electric motor. Over the next 20 years or so, battery technology improved significantly. One of the most notable accomplishments was the modern lead-acid battery created by H. Tudor and the nickel-iron battery that was developed by Edison and Junger.
     In a two-year period that began in 1897, The Pope Manufacturing Company in Hartford, Connecticut built 500 electric cars. In 1899, the company merged with two smaller electric companies to create the Electric Vehicle Company. This was the first large automotive company, and it was worth $200 million.
     When gas-powered, steam-powered, and electric cars were compared at the first National Automobile Show in 1900, most people preferred the electric ones. Steam-powered cars were their second choice. Thousands of electric cars were produced at the beginning of the 20th century.
     A change came in 1904 when Henry Ford was able to fix the noise, vibration, and smell problems people complained about with gas-powered cars. He produced a cheap, light weight gas-powered car that sank the Electric Vehicle Company. By 1913, gas-powered cars became easier to use and the number of electric cars sold dropped to 6,000. That same year, 182,809 Model-T Fords were sold.
     In 1966, Congress first recommended the use of electric vehicles to reduce the amount of air pollution. Between 1968 and 1971 a group of scientists at a major auto supplier called TRW developed a hybrid power train, or way of generating power in a car. Many of the concepts they came up with are used for the hybrid cars we have today.
     Although many companies tried their hand at developing hybrid cars, Honda’s Insight became the first hybrid car to be mass marketed in the United States in 1999. Since then, the Toyota Prius (first released in 2000) and the Honda Civic Hybrid (available since 2002) have been popular cars.

45. According to the article, what happened as a result of the National Auto Show in 1901?

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Gas-powered cars became easier to use, and the number of electric cars sold dropped to 6,000.




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Thousands of electric cars were produced at the beginning of the 20th century.




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Honda's Insight became the first hybrid car to be mass marketed in the United States in 1999.




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D.

Congress first recommended the use of electric vehicles to reduce the amount of air pollution.




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