People who go to live in other countries should follow the customs and traditions of their country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? INTRODUCTION
1.1 Many think that when a person migrates to another place they are expected to follow practices and rituals native to that place. • GIVE YOUR OPINION 1.2 This essay strongly agrees that we should follow and adopt the good traditions innate to the country as a way of respect. • OUTLINE THE SPECIFIC TOPICS 1.3 Firstly, this essay will discuss why we should value the beliefs of the country we are living in and secondly the negative impacts if we don't abide by their rules. BODY PARAGRAPHS
INTRODUCE THE TOPIC (TOPIC SENTENCE)
2.1 On the one hand, there are many benefits of accepting the culture of the country you migrate to.
EXPLAIN/GIVE DETAIL
2.2 It's crucial that one should follow and adapt to the customary traditions of the country you move to in order to integrate into the culture. 2.3 In addition, we need to appreciate other customs because this will help us to seamlessly adapt to new surroundings and make friends with others. • EXAMPLE 2.4 For example, an article by the local newpaper named Today in 2014 revealed that 80% of people who immigrate to the Uzbekistan learn about traditions and customs prior to moving. INTRODUCE THE TOPIC (TOPIC SENTENCE) 3.1 On the other hand, every country has its own set of traditions and customs. • EXPLAIN/GIVE DETAIL 3.2 Some of these practices and rituals are somehow unusual to migrators because they are hard to follow and difficult to understand and as a result, certain actions can jeopardize the budding relationships that are built with them. 3.3 This can also affect the image of countries outside of their culture, giving people the wrong impression as well as showing disrespect in certain situations. • EXAMPLE 3.4 For instance, a news report by Milliy Channel in 2014 showed a story about a Mexican family who migrated to Saudi Arabia that was forced to leave the country because they were found guilty of ot respecting the Ramadan Traditions. CONCLUSION
In conclusion, I strongly agree that we need to abide and respect the traditions of any culture from any place because it not only allows us to adapt to new place but to make friends fronm all over the world.
