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You have attempted to answer the question ‘Why is Omar stitching footballs secretly at home?’. Your answer has some good ideas in it but is too brief to answer the question fully.
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You have described where in the world footballs are made. You have shown how the football industry has affected Omar’s life..
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You have begun to explain why so many footballs are made in Sialkot. You have explained how Omar’s life was affected by the Atlanta agreement.
Some of the sub-questions may not be fully answered but your answer is mainly complete.
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This is a detailed piece of work that answers the question fully; it includes information from all of the five paragraphs. You explain clearly how the Atlanta agreement has affected the community of Sialkot. You have used a range of geographical vocabulary in your answer.
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This is a complete piece of work that has answered the main question ‘Why is Omar stitching footballs secretly at home?’. Your work follows a logical format and contains a sensible conclusion. You have used a wide range of geographical vocabulary.
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