I. Thesis Statement A. Hook B. Introduction
II.Apple Inc. changed the way people purchase, view and use technology.
A.Apple inc. is a company a lot of people have bought from. (Use active voice. Example: Many people purchase products from Apple Inc.)
B.People enjoy using Apple products.
C.From the beginning of the formation of the corporation, Apple Inc has changed the world.
3.Steve Jobs founded Apple Inc.
D.Apple Inc. today
4.The future for Apple remains bright. Its obvious that people worldwide likes Apples products.
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Write complete, sentences in an active voice.
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