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| BEULAH HEIGHTS UNIVERSITY
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____________________ In partial fulfillment Of the requirements for the Course ENGLISH 102 ____________________ By
Gloria MCClinton Dwan Harris Dianne Wade [March 7, 2008] In a prevalent stage of unethical times 24c:[Add comma (Use a comma to set off most introductory elements)] Beulah Heights University is beneficial to all nationalities for the /Do not capitalize/XExtraordinary XPresident, XChapel XServices, and XPrestigious XProfessors. In the center of /Wrong word:chronological--historical Grant Park of the Atlanta District sits our esteemed University,(Add comma: appositive): Beulah Heights. The campus consists of restored buildings such as the Do not capitalize Chapel, Business Office, Stately Classroom Buildings, Library (computer equipped), and it is (24b) surrounded (participle 7, 8) by beautiful landscaping. (-1) Do not add space: double-space consistently. /-5/ [Modifying clause = dependent clause= FRAGMNENT (Chapter 12): XUnder the direction and leadership of our extraordinary President Dr. Benson M. Karanja, who has developed and reconstructed Beulah into a /uUniversity with unspeakable works of character, production, and uniqueness. /The following sentence is awkward (needs revision): Dr. Karanja arrived at Beulah working a janitorial position until finally embracing his position as pPresident. He has helped to develop the original vision of Beulah Heights, which was/is/ to impact the world by developing, mentoring, and training twelve to eighteen missionaries who would travel all corners of the wWorld, proceeding President Emeritus (Dr. Samuel R. Chand D.D.) and original founders Rev. Paul and Hattie Barth. Beulah now has become a gGlobalization uUniversity embracing thirty eight different nations. The opportunity is present to note that Beulah is one of the largest predominantly minority institutions, /contains—containing (participle = modifier) hundreds of students from about fifty denominations, and most of all [Add comma (Place commas around transitional words and around parenthetical expressions)] Beulah is accredited with two nationally recognized USU.S. (periods with abbreviations) Office of Education approved agencies. President Karanja /has written(Chapter 8) /?:doctrine Grains of SandITALICIZE views the /Don’t capitalize:Grace of God at Work. He originally migrated from Kenya, East Africa in 1987 creating a real life rags - to - riches story. Dr. Karanja is renowned in Kenya as the first black to become president of a United States College. President Karanja has received his Bachelor of Arts degree (Beulah Heights University), Business Administration (Brenan University), Master of Science and Doctorate in Education (Clark Atlanta University). Dr. Karanja mentors migrant ethnic leaders on cultural thinking and introducing/introduces/ them to Christian leaders and business people in the United States. His greatest accomplishment /DELETE:one may state/ is exemplifying his strong testimonial success story as a product of Beulah Heights which has coupled his beliefs, dedication, goals, and workmanship skills to lead our uUniversity out of a financial deficit. /-2/ X
X The pProfessors at Beulah cover an extensive scope of university doctrine in their diversity of cultures and itinerary teachings. Countless influences and inspirations that structure our cities, states, and other countries derived from the professors of this great university. The students are inspired to change social standards of today’s society. The professors have motivated many students to make continuous advancements and achievements in their churches and homes. Students listen to their professor’s /professors’/ [This is a plural possessive. The apostrophe belongs outside the "s"] lectures while involving themselves with potential life changing questions in which the professors are always enthusiastic to provide information required to successfully help grasp the material, however allowing the professor opportunity to witness the student’s [This is a plural possessive. The apostrophe belongs outside the "s"] interest and enthusiasm. In order to enrich the college experience [Add comma (Use a comma to set off most introductory elements)] most professors genuinely desire to know and understand their student’s [This is a plural possessive. The apostrophe belongs outside the "s"] behavioral concepts, structural knowledge, [Delete comma ( not required)] and ability to create sound doctrine producing a change in historical beliefs, life aspects, creation, and origins. /-5/ In ones [Add an apostrophe. This is a possessive, not plural.] pursuit of continuation of education it’s appropriate to state Beulah offers XWorld and Community Leadership in biblical revelation and exhibits an understanding of hermeneutical principles. Visitors may wish to experience the opportunity of Discovery Week which provides an understanding of program objectives to acknowledge spiritual dynamics (Christian leadership), XWorld Religions, XReligious Cultures, key organizational leadership elements, problem solving – conflict resolution methodologies, and X identify identifies Shift in verb-number/power structures within cultures (communities) all allowing a person to become a life changer /-1/ though through/the Word of the God. Beulah invites you/everyone (See chapter 9R) to make a change, consider restoring, and magnifying that which is silent in your life. 86/B+ CONTENT & DEVELOPMENT: EXCELLENT! Review capitalization rules & Chapter 17 for sentence variety. Add transitions! Superbly done! Please don’t hesitate to ask questions! Download 18.22 Kb. Share with your friends:
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