Shoreline Community College annual outcomes assessment report—2002-03



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ANALYSIS


Actual,

High Risk

Nursing diagnoses.


Uses NANDA terminology. Defining

characteristics identified and accurate

for this patient.

Evidence listed in database and with

Nsg Dx.


Most nursing diagnoses accurate, concise &

substantiated by data documented.


Beginning use of NANDA terminology
Some points incomplete.

Key points missing. Data not in database.
One or two diagnoses are documented but

may not be appropriate for situation.

One or two nursing diagnoses listed

but not relevant/ priority unclear.



Wellness

Diagnoses

Targets more than one wellness diagnosis –

Accurately related to patient’s or family’s

data or situation


Includes one “Wellness diagnosis” based on

presenting data



No data described to support chosen

wellness diagnosis

Wellness diagnosis not included

    1. PLANNING


Desired

outcomes

Clearly stated. Patient focused.

Measurable, realistic time limits.

Realistic for patient.

Appropriate for nurse.




Clearly stated. Accurate. Minor points missing

Minor point on discharge planning missing.



Not clearly stated. Does not relate to nursing diagnosis. Key points on discharge planning missing.

Unrealistic for patient and/or nurse.




DC

planning


Advocates for pt/family by addressing

potential future needs/concerns –

knows resources, recognizes need for

referrals



Discharge planning clear and individualized

Incomplete discharge plan or No discharge planning evident.

Planned

Interventions

Nursing interventions are appropriate, reflecting evidence based practice.

Rationale clear and correct.

Realistic for student to accomplish.



Basic nursing interventions listed yet may have a

narrow, more limited focus


Rationale clear, correct, with minor points missing.

Nursing interventions are not realistic
Not appropriate for nursing student or refelect medical
Rationale has key points missing/ can’t be

Substantiated.


    1. IMPLEMENTATION


Direct care

Teaching

Collaboration

Complex interventions done with

instructor and/or staff nurse

Uses research-based interventions

(Evidence based practice)

Student shows initiative re teaching pt/

family re meds/ test results

Standards of care achieved with greater independence

Collaborating with pt/family desires and

The multidisciplinary team


Interventions done checked.
Key interventions are done independently in a

timely manner and according to standards of care.


Collaborative care efforts - nursing actions are

implemented and coordinated with




Guidance/assistance needed through most interventions. Student needs direction to

justify and administer prn meds.

Key interventions were not

implemented

Care is disorganized, unsafe or unsatisfactory to staff or family.
Incomplete evaluation

of pt response

Challenges with prioritizing and time management with multipe pt assignment


EVALUATION

Evaluations

Overall nursing care and plan evaluated. Outcome statements are evaluated on

outcome achieved or progress toward

the outcome.

Revisions and suggestions for change

Discussed - shows critical thinking


Evaluation of desired outcomes clear.

Brief analysis or minor omissions on suggestions

for revision.


Key points left out of evaluation statements.

Does not evaluate clearly


Related evaluation to nsg intervention rather

than desired patient outcomes


No reflection on entire process – limited

discussion re what worked, didn’t work, or

areas for revision


Medication evaluation


Clear evaluation specific to patient
Troubleshoots problems or actual

side effects w/ more independence and

implements appropriate plan for nsg

action


Efficacy and/or actual side effects discussed &

communicated to appropriate healthcare team

members,

Collaborates re appropriate interventions prn.





Provides laundry list of indications/side effects

for meds, ie. Not individualized to pt

Unable to evaluate impact of pharmacological interventions

required



N271 NURSING PROCESS PAPER (NPP) RUBRIC Number ______

Student _______________________________ Date______________________

Instructions: Turn in a copy of the rubric with each NPP. GRADE:_______________ Instructor:_____________________

SECTION

EXCELLENT

(Exceeds standard- meets satisfactory criteria and adds the following)

SATISFACTORY

(Meets standard- passing)


UNSATISFACTORY

(Below standard)


Nursing Assessment

Data Collection

Correctly identifies data and patient issues. Includes patient’s prior level of function. Incorporates understanding of primary and secondary medical diagnosis. Assessment includes information from the patient on the signs/symptoms and risk factors of the medical disorder which in not found in the medical record.

Patient identification complete and accurate.

Correct medical diagnoses identified.

Pertinent health history including acute and/or chronic conditions.

Explains surgery and/procedures.

Describes pathophysiology clearly addressing changes of form and/ or function and incorporating understanding of the significance of the secondary diagnosis.

Identifies protocols and care pathways.



Some sections are incomplete or inaccurate.

Understanding of patient’s experience related to admission complaint missing (i.e. time frames, symptom development). Health history provides limited detail. Pathophysiology does not address secondary conditions. Pathophysiology defined but not clearly described (copied from text or medical dictionary) and not related to patient.

Protocols omitted.


Anticipated Problems

Demonstrates understanding of prioritizing existing diagnosis. Defining characteristics and nursing interventions reflect comprehensive understanding of existing pathophysiology.

Problems are written with correct language and format and reflect understanding of patients primary and secondary diagnosis and related psychosocial responses.

Problem statements are correct but have some wording or format errors. Defining characteristics and/or interventions are not individualized for the patient. Any section is incomplete.

Medications/IVs


Specific purpose of meds includes understanding of the related medical diagnosis and understanding of related laboratory values if indicated.


Data is complete, accurate and clear. All medications have generic names listed. The specific purpose of each medication is correctly identified. Evaluation of the effectiveness of medications is complete and clear. Presence of side effects or lack of side effects is clearly documented for each medication.

All data is present but some of it is confusing or unclear. Some medications are listed by trade name only. Some evaluations of the effectiveness of medications are absent or unclear.

Any section is incomplete.



Laboratory/Diagnostic Tests


Abnormal values include knowledge of trends over time. The significance of the values and nursing implications demonstrate understanding of the patients primary and secondary disease states.


Abnormal values (or unexpected normal values) are identified with their normal ranges. The significance or possible causes for the abnormal values are identified. Nursing implications are appropriate for the patient.

Abnormal values are identified with normal ranges. The significance of the values and/or the implications for nursing care are appropriate for the lab value but lack understanding of the patient’s situation.

Any section is incomplete


Human Needs/ System Assessment


Data is especially succinct, well organized, legible, representing language and format appropriate for current clinical practice. Entries for day 2 and 3 reflect detail appropriate for the patient’s changing condition.

Data clearly presented for each system focusing on abnormal findings and utilizing appropriate language, abbreviations, and symbols. Data includes in-depth assessment of current medical conditions (primary and secondary) and abnormal findings of the patient. Appropriate changes are noted for day 2 and 3.

Data present for each system but focuses mainly on normal or stable findings. Data lacks in-depth assessment on current medical conditions of patient.

Language or abbreviations do not reflect current clinical use. In-depth assessment of current problem areas missing. Abnormal findings recorded without appropriate investigation. Changes for day 2 and 3 lack detail. Sections are incomplete or absent.



Analysis (Nursing Diagnoses & Collaborative Problems)


Actual/High Risk Nursing Nursng Diagnoses/Collaborative Problems


Identifies inter-relationship of problems reflecting a comprehensive understanding of the individual and the pathophysiology. Problems are prioritized.

Both physiological and psychosocial problems are included.



Problems are in PES format. Signs and symptoms listed are present in the assessment data. High Risk and Collaborative problems are utilized reflecting understanding of the individual and the diagnosis.

Problems are not supported by the assessment data. Problems do not reflect correct understanding of the individual or the pathophysiology.

Absent, inaccurate, or inappropriate for patient



PLAN: Select one nursing diagnosis for Individualized Plan of Care


Discharge Problems, Needs & Plans


Progress on implementation of plans is discussed. Involved disciplines have been contacted regarding discharge needs.


Identifies problems or needs that would limit patient’s successful discharge. Identifies a specific plan or each problem. Person or discipline responsible to address each part of discharge plan is identified.

Describes discharge problems in non-specific language without identification of appropriate need or plan or discipline. Absent or unrealistic for patient and/or nurse

Individualized Care Plan: Nursing Diagnosis

Identifies a nursing diagnosis or collaborative problem that was not readily apparent and had been overlooked by staff.

Nursing diagnosis/collaborative problem is chosen from Problem Identification/ Analysis section of nursing process paper. Nursing diagnosis is complete in PES format, accurate and appropriate for patient.

Nursing Diagnosis is incorrectly stated. Nursing diagnosis was not on list of actual diagnosis, was incomplete in its documentation or was absent.

Desired Outcomes



Reflect understanding of patient’s current priority needs.

Outcomes are clearly stated, patient focused, -measureable, -time-limited, realistic for patient,-appropriate for nurse

Not clearly stated, not clearly measurable.

Outcomes do not relate to the identified problem.



IMPLEMENTATION










Nursing Interventions


Seeks additional references to incorporate innovative strategies in care.


Interventions lead to achieving outcomes, and would be clear to another nurse. Interventions are realistic to implement, and involve individualized actions not currently in place through protocols or standards of care. Nursing interventions have been checked to indicate implementation. Rational is clearly identified.

Interventions lack clarity. Language is ambiguous. The majority of identified interventions are already in place through existing protocols or standards. Rationale is not clearly identified. Nursing interventions are not checked to indicate if they were carried out.

Interventions are not directed toward the identified outcome.



EVALUATION










Evaluation of individual outcomes


After each ”Met” or “Not met” a brief description is included in how this was achieved.

Achievement of each outcome is indicated with “met” or “not met”.


Explanation of outcomes is given but it is not clear if each outcome was achieved or not. Evaluation is absent. Explanations of Nursing Interventions given.

Suggestions for revising plan.

Suggestions for revision demonstrate thoughtful reflection of the plan, its impact on the patient’s experience and how it could be improved.

Critical thinking skills are demonstrated through discussion of the plan in terms of “cause” and “effect” and how the plan could be improved.


Suggestions for revisions cover some of “not met” outcomes. Identifies problems in achieving outcomes but not suggestions for revisions included. The plan is evaluated in general terms lacking analysis



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APPENDIX H

ESL Rubric Development Project

Lauren Wilson, Project Manager

ESL Instructor, lwilso@ctc.edu x5869
The purpose of this project was to write and begin using assessment rubrics in Shoreline’s ESL courses level 1 to level 5. The rubrics, which are detailed descriptions of skill competencies in reading, writing, listening, speaking, and grammar, will facilitate smooth transitions within ESL levels 1 - 5 and to Academic ESL levels 6 – 8, for which rubrics have already been developed. The rubrics will benefit our program because they will standardize expectations for level completion, assist faculty members in on-going and final assessment of students, provide a framework for consistent grading practices, and allow for easier comparison of the skill level of students in different classes.
The rubrics were written in committee by a group of six faculty members: Holly Havnaer, Donna Linn (Winter only), John McCormick, Jo McEntire, Josie Saldin, Daina Smuidrins (Spring only) and Lauren Wilson. The group met consistently during winter and spring quarters, drafted the rubrics in pairs or groups of three, and then edited and discussed them in the whole group. Instructors will pilot the rubrics during the summer quarter.
The group worked very hard and benefited by the opportunity to discuss the goals of our program, and re-examine our curriculum and Master Course Outlines. The faculty who worked on this committee (half full-time and half associate) feel committed to the usefulness and importance of this project.
The next phase of the project – implementation – may be more of a challenge. Adult Basic Education and ESL programs are increasingly being asked to comply with federal requirements for standardized assessment in order to retain funding. Beginning in fall, our program must use a standardized test not of our choosing for federal and state recording purposes; however, as of yet, we will still be able to use our own assessment tools to measure the progress of our students. As these assessment changes are being made and faculty are adjusting to them, we hope that our rubrics will offer a clear and precise tool for faculty in their teaching.
The draft rubrics will be posted on the ESL faculty website by the end of the first week of summer quarter. The ones posted there will be the most finalized drafts, but I will attach working drafts below for your perusal.

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Listening and Speaking LEVEL 1 6/2/18





Listening

Speaking

4

Exceptional




  • Accurately identify key information on basic topics (personal information, daily activities, family shopping, clothing, food, places in the community, etc.)

  • Almost always respond appropriately to simple yes/no and information questions (Be, simple present/continuous)

  • Almost always accurately follow one-step directions given orally or as indicated by appropriate gestures (sit down, come in, etc.)

  • Almost always identify or decode sound-symbol relationships

  • Almost always use appropriate grammar in basic sentences (to be, simple present/continuous, word order, pronouns, basic prepositions, adverbs of frequency, determiners, non-count/count), appropriate vocabulary, comprehensible pronunciation with little hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, such as:

    • answering personal info. questions

    • describing family, places, pictures, weather

    • explaining daily routine

    • asking for and giving change

    • stating likes/dislikes, basic wants/needs, and basic abilities

2

Developing



  • Often cannot identify key information on basic topics (see above)

  • Often cannot respond appropriately to simple yes/no and information questions (see above)

  • Often cannot follow one-step directions given orally or as indicated by appropriate gestures (see above)

  • Often cannot identify or decode sound-symbol relationships

  • Often cannot use appropriate grammar in basic sentences (to be, simple present/continuous, word order, pronouns, basic prepositions, adverbs of frequency, determiners, non-count/count), appropriate vocabulary, comprehensible pronunciation with little hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, as above

1

Beginning



  • Minimal ability to identify key information on basic topics (see above)

  • Minimal ability to respond appropriately to simple yes/no and information questions (see above)

  • Minimal ability to follow one-step directions given orally or as indicated by appropriate gestures (see above)

  • Minimal ability to identify or decode sound-symbol relationships

  • Minimal ability to use appropriate grammar in basic sentences (to be, simple present/continuous, word order, pronouns, basic prepositions, adverbs of frequency, determiners, non-count/count), appropriate vocabulary, comprehensible pronunciation with little hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, as above

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Listening and Speaking LEVEL 2 6/2/18





Listening

Speaking

4

Exceptional




  • Accurately identify key information on a simple topic (individual, family, health, food, banking, jobs) found in level appropriate texts (read aloud, on a cassette or video)

  • Almost always respond appropriately to simple questions (past, present, and future yes/no and information questions)

  • Almost always accurately follow simple oral directions (map directions, doctor’s instructions, and basic recipes)

  • Almost always respond appropriately to basic non-verbal cues

  • Almost always use appropriate grammar in basic sentences (subject/verb agreement, word order, correct use of BE verb, present tenses, future with will, regular and some irregular past, with connecting words such as and, but, so, and because) appropriate vocabulary, comprehensible pronunciation, with little hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, such as:

-describe self and family

-open, maintain and close a conversation

-ask questions (with DO, BE and WH question words)

-express needs, wants, likes, dislikes

-state location and describe a simple process with imperatives (It’s on 4th Street, turn left, turn right, add water, etc.)


3

Competent




  • Almost always accurately identify key information on a simple topic found in level appropriate texts

  • Usually respond appropriately to simple questions (past, present, and future yes/no and information questions)

  • Usually follow simple oral directions (map directions, doctor’s instructions, and basic recipes)

  • Usually respond appropriately to basic non-verbal cues

  • Usually use appropriate grammar in basic sentences, vocabulary, comprehensible pronunciation, with little hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, as above




2

Developing



  • Often cannot identify key information on a simple topic found in level appropriate texts

  • Often cannot respond appropriately to simple questions

  • Often cannot follow simple oral directions

  • Often cannot respond appropriately to basic non-verbal cues

  • Often use incorrect grammar, inappropriate register and vocabulary; incomprehensible pronunciation and/or hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, as above




1

Beginning



  • Unable to identify key information on a simple topic found in level appropriate texts

  • Unable to respond appropriately to simple questions

  • Unable to follow simple oral directions

  • Unable to respond appropriately to basic non-verbal cues

  • use incorrect grammar, inappropriate register and vocabulary; incomprehensible pronunciation, with significant hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, as above



Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Listening and Speaking LEVEL 3 6/2/18





Listening

Speaking

4

Exceptional




  • Accurately identify key information on a familiar topic (family, school, work, health) found in level appropriate texts (read aloud, on cassettes or video) in both formal and informal registers

  • Almost always respond appropriately to questions (yes/no and information questions using present, past and present perfect verb tenses and time clauses)

  • Almost always accurately follow multi-step oral directions and map directions

  • Almost always respond appropriately to non-verbal cues

  • Almost always use appropriate grammar in full sentences when necessary (subject/verb agreement, correct verb tenses, modals and word order), appropriate register, basic appropriate vocabulary, comprehensible pronunciation, with little or no hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, such as:

- initiate and maintain conversations about familiar topics

-ask for clarification

-request information/assistance

-describe future goals

-give advice

-describe past experience

-share opinions

-describe changes in one’s life

-give directions

-explain a process

-report an injury, absence, accident

-describe a person, event



3

Competent




  • Usually accurately identify key information on a familiar topic

  • Usually respond appropriately to simple questions

  • Usually follow multi-step oral directions

  • Usually respond appropriately to non-verbal cues

  • Usually use appropriate grammar, register, vocabulary, comprehensible pronunciation and little hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, as above




2

Developing



  • Often cannot identify key information on a familiar topic

  • Often cannot respond appropriately to simple questions

  • Often cannot follow oral multi-step instructions

  • Often cannot respond appropriately to non-verbal cues

  • Often use incorrect grammar, and inappropriate register and vocabulary; incomprehensible pronunciation and/or hesitation while carrying out various tasks, as above




1

Beginning



  • Minimal ability to identify key information on a familiar topic

  • Minimal ability to respond to simple questions

  • Minimal ability to follow oral multi-step directions

  • Minimal ability to respond to non-verbal cues

  • use incorrect grammar and inappropriate register, vocabulary; incomprehensible pronunciation and/or hesitation, while carrying out various tasks, as above

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Listening and Speaking LEVEL 4 6/2/18





Listening

Speaking

4

Exceptional




  • Almost always accurately identify essential and non-essential information in familiar, unfamiliar and authentic contexts (*personal, vocational, and academic)

  • Almost always apply various strategies to determine meaning in aural information (*context clues, drawing inferences)

  • Almost always differentiate between formal and informal register

  • Almost always distinguish among complex questions, statements, and imperatives.

  • Almost always follow complex directions (*such as for group projects)

  • Almost always appropriately respond to and use non non-verbal communication

  • Almost always use appropriate grammar in full sentences when necessary (*including noun and adverbial clauses, present, past, future, progressive and perfect tenses, modals, gerunds and infinitives)

  • Almost always use appropriate register and vocabulary, when possible incorporating newly acquired vocabulary from class content

  • Almost always speak with intelligible pronunciation, little/no hesitation and make time shifts when appropriate

  • Using the above, carry out various level and content appropriate tasks

3

Competent




  • Usually accurately identify essential and non-essential information in familiar, unfamiliar and authentic contexts (*see above)

  • Usually apply various strategies to determine meaning in aural information (*see above)

  • Usually differentiate between formal and informal register

  • Usually distinguish among complex questions, statements, and imperatives.

  • Usually follow complex directions

  • Usually appropriately respond to and use non non-verbal communication

  • Usually use appropriate grammar in full sentences when necessary (*see above)

  • Usually use appropriate register and vocabulary, when possible incorporating newly acquired vocabulary from class content

  • Almost always speak with intelligible pronunciation, little/ no hesitation, and can usually make time shifts when appropriate

  • Using the above, carry out various level and content appropriate tasks

2

Developing



  • Often cannot accurately identify essential and non-essential information (*see above)

  • Often cannot apply various strategies to determine meaning in aural information (*see above)

  • Often cannot differentiate between formal and informal register

  • Often cannot distinguish among complex questions, statements, and imperatives.

  • Often cannot follow complex directions

  • Often cannot appropriately respond to and use non non-verbal communication

  • Often use incorrect grammar and/or incomplete sentences (*see above)

  • Often use inappropriate register and is unable to incorporate newly acquired vocabulary correctly

  • Often speak with unintelligible pronunciation, hesitation and is unable to make correct time shifts

  • Using the above, often can not carry out level and content appropriate tasks

1

Beginning



  • Unable to accurately identify essential and non-essential information (*see above)

  • Unable to apply various strategies to determine meaning in aural information (*see above)

  • Unable to differentiate between formal and informal register

  • Unable to distinguish among complex questions, statements, and imperatives.

  • Unable to follow complex directions

  • Unable to appropriately respond to and use non non-verbal communication

  • Use incorrect grammar and is unable to speak in full sentences when necessary (*see above)

  • Use inappropriate register and is unable to incorporate newly acquired vocabulary

  • Speak with unintelligible pronunciation, hesitation and is unable to make correct time shifts

  • Using the above, is unable to carry out level and content appropriate tasks

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Reading LEVEL 1 6/2/18



4

Exceptional




  • Reading accurately demonstrates ability to comprehend basic words, common signs, and symbols about self, home and environment.

  • Reading demonstrates complete recognition of English alphabet, cardinal (1-100) and ordinal numbers (First to tenth)

  • Able to understand and follow independently one-step written directions.

  • Can successfully decode basic monosyllabic vocabulary words.

  • Accurately identifies U.S. coins, currency and their value and read money amounts.

  • Reading demonstrates full and complete comprehension of level appropriate texts and information (i.e. very simple stories, information in forms, etc.)

3

Competent




  • Reading usually demonstrates ability to comprehend basic words, common signs and symbols about self, home and environment.

  • Reading usually demonstrates recognition of English alphabet, cardinal and ordinal numbers.

  • Can understand and follow one-step written directions with limited assistance.

  • Can almost always successfully decode basic monosyllabic vocabulary words.

  • Identifies U.S. coins, currency and their value and read money amounts with limited assistance.

  • Reading usually demonstrates comprehension of level appropriate texts and information. (i.e. very simple stories, information in forms, etc.)

2

Developing



  • Reading sometimes demonstrates ability to comprehend basic words, common signs, and symbols about self, home and environment.

  • Reading sometimes demonstrates recognition of English alphabet, cardinal and ordinal numbers.

  • Simple one-step written directions are understood and followed with assistance.

  • Can decode basic monosyllabic vocabulary words with some difficulty.

  • Identifies U.S. coins, currency and their value and read money amounts with assistance.

  • Reading sometimes demonstrates comprehension of level appropriate texts and information. (i.e. very simple stories, information in forms, etc.)

1

Beginning



  • Reading demonstrates no comprehension of how print gives meaning to self, home and environment.

  • Reading does not reflect recognition of English alphabet, cardinal and ordinal numbers.

  • Simple one- step written directions are not understand.

  • Inability to decode basic monosyllabic vocabulary words.

  • Identifies U.S. coins, currency and their value and read money amounts with great difficulty and requires assistance.

  • *Reading demonstrates inability to comprehend level appropriate texts and information.



Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Reading LEVEL 2 6/2/18



4

Exceptional




  • Fully comprehend level appropriate texts (i.e. paragraphs and stories about people, places, things and activities, simple personal information forms, bills, signs, medicine labels, schedules and maps)

  • Successfully identify main points in chronological order

  • Accurately follow multiple-step directions found in real-life situations

  • Locate words and numbers according to alphanumeric order

  • Recognize common weights and measures and their abbreviations

  • Apply sound/symbol relationships to decode familiar and useful vocabulary




3

Competent




  • Typically comprehend level appropriate texts

  • Typically identify main points in chronological order

  • Typically follow multiple-step directions found on forms in real-life situations

  • Usually locate words and numbers according to alphanumeric order

  • Usually recognize common weights and measures and their abbreviations

  • Usually apply sound/symbol relationships to decode familiar and useful vocabulary

2

Developing



  • Partially comprehend level appropriate texts

  • Partially identify main points in chronological order

  • Partially follow multiple-step directions found on forms in real-life situations

  • Show some ability to locate words and numbers according to alphanumeric order

  • Show some ability to recognize common weights and measures and their abbreviations

  • Show some ability to apply sound/symbol relationships to decode familiar and useful vocabulary




1

Beginning



  • Unable to comprehend level appropriate texts

  • Unable to identify main points in chronological order

  • Show little or no ability to follow multiple-step directions found on forms in real-life situations

  • Show little or no ability to locate words and numbers according to alphanumeric order

  • Show little or no ability to recognize common weights and measures and their abbreviations

  • Show little or no ability to apply sound/symbol relationships to decode familiar and useful vocabulary

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Reading LEVEL 3 6/2/18



4

Exceptional




  • Fully comprehend level appropriate texts (i.e. multi-paragraph narratives, news articles written or simplified for ESL students on various personal and familiar topics, schedules, maps, informational pamphlets, bills, medical prescriptions, and other texts found in real-life situations)

  • Interpret simple charts, tables and forms correctly

  • Apply pre-reading and reading skills to identify topics/important details and to make simple guesses/predictions about written material

  • Apply reading strategies in order to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words in a text (such as understanding context clues and using a dictionary)

  • Follow written directions

  • Apply sound/symbol relationships to decode vocabulary successfully




3

Competent




  • Typically comprehend level appropriate texts

  • Typically interpret simple charts, tables and forms correctly

  • Typically apply pre-reading and reading skills to identify topics/important details and to make simple guesses/predictions about written material

  • Usually apply reading strategies in order to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words in a text

  • Student almost always follow written directions

  • Almost always apply sound/symbol relationships to decode vocabulary successfully

2

Developing



  • Partially comprehend level appropriate texts

  • Partially interpret simple charts, tables and forms

  • Show little application of pre-reading and reading skills to identify topics/important details and to make simple guesses/predictions about written material

  • Rarely apply reading strategies in order to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words in a text

  • Partially follow written directions

  • Partially apply sound/symbol relationships to decode vocabulary

1

Beginning



  • Unable to comprehend level appropriate texts

  • Unable to interpret simple charts, tables and forms

  • Show very little or no application of pre-reading and reading skills to identify topics/important details and to make simple guesses/predictions about written material

  • Show very little or no application of reading strategies in order to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words in a text

  • Unable to follow written directions

  • Unable to apply sound/symbol relationships to decode vocabulary

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics

Reading LEVEL 4



4

Exceptional




  • Fully comprehends level-appropriate written materials (up to multi-page fictional and non-fictional texts that bridge personal, professional and academic themes, simplified news articles, authentic ads for jobs, apartments, etc.).

  • Correctly interprets increasingly difficult graphs, charts, tables and forms.

  • Applies pre-reading and reading skills (such as make predictions, skim for and identify main idea, scan for detail, make simple inferences, draw conclusions).

  • Applies various strategies to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words in a text (such as context clues, knowledge of cognates, prefixes, suffixes, roots, ignoring an unfamiliar word, reading ahead to connect information, using an English dictionary, etc.).

  • Identifies transitions in order to understand the relationship between ideas (however, first, second, because etc.).

  • Always follows written directions.




3

Competent




  • Generally comprehends level-appropriate written materials.

  • Usually interprets increasingly complex graphs, charts, tables and forms.

  • Often applies pre-reading and reading skills.

  • Can apply some strategies to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words in a text.

  • Shows some ability to identify transitions in order to understand the relationship between ideas.

  • Almost always follows written directions.

2

Developing



  • Incompletely comprehends various types and lengths of level-appropriate written materials.

  • Incompletely interprets increasingly complex graphs, charts, tables and forms.

  • Shows little application of pre-reading and reading skills

  • Rarely applies strategies to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words in a text

  • Shows little ability to identify transitions in order to understand the relationship between ideas

  • Has little ability to follow written directions.

1

Beginning



  • Unable to comprehend of various types and lengths of level-appropriate written materials.

  • Unable to comprehend increasingly complex graphs, charts, tables and forms.

  • Shows very little or no application of pre-reading and reading skills.

  • Shows very little or no application of reading strategies to determine unfamiliar words.

  • Shows very little or no ability to identify transitions in order to understand the relationship between ideas.

  • Unable to follow written directions.

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Reading LEVEL 5 6/2/18



4

Exceptional



  • Fully comprehend various types and lengths of level appropriate written materials (i.e. fictional and non-fictional texts that bridge personal, professional and academic themes, news articles, short stories, short novels, etc.)

  • Correctly interpret complex graphs, charts, tables and forms

  • Successfully apply pre-reading and reading skills (i.e. make predictions about written material, skim/scan written material for and accurately identify main idea, scan for detail, summarize texts, make inferences, and draw conclusions

  • Apply reading strategies to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words in a text (such as context clues, knowledge of cognates, prefixes, suffixes, roots, ignoring an unfamiliar word, using an English dictionary, reading ahead to connect information, etc.)

  • Identify transitions in order to understand the relationship between ideas (however, first, second, because, etc.)

3

Competent



  • Comprehend various types and lengths of written materials

  • Typically interpret complex graphs, charts, tables and forms correctly

  • Often apply pre-reading and reading skills

  • Often apply reading strategies to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words skills

  • Often identify transitions in order to understand the relationship between ideas

2

Developing



  • Partially comprehend various types and lengths of written material

  • Partially interpret complex graphs, charts, tables and forms

  • Rarely use pre-reading and reading skills

  • Rarely apply reading strategies to determine the meanings of unfamiliar words successfully

  • Rarely identify transitions in order to understand the relationship between ideas successfully

1

Beginning



  • Show little or no comprehension of various types of written material

  • Show little or no comprehension of complex graphs, charts, tables and forms

  • Unable to use pre-reading and reading skills

  • Unable to apply reading strategies to determine unfamiliar words

  • Unable to identify transitions in order to understand the relationship between ideas

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Writing LEVEL 1 6/2/18



4

Exceptional




  • Write simple sentences

  • Content describes self and family members, daily routines, occupations, shopping, classroom, home and community

  • Accurate use of be verb (past and present), have verb, simple present/continuous, pronouns, determiners, adjectives, adverbs of frequency, negatives, word order (subject+verb+object), subject/verb agreement, punctuation, capitalization, correct spelling, and legible writing

  • Writing includes new basic vocabulary

  • Accurate spelling

3

Competent




  • Write simple sentences

  • Content describes self and family members, daily routines, occupations, shopping, classroom, home and community

  • Most sentences show accurate use of be verb (past and present), have verb, simple present/continuous, pronouns, determiners, adjectives, adverbs of frequency, negatives, word order (subject+verb+object), subject/verb agreement, punctuation, capitalization, correct spelling, and legible writing

  • Writing includes use of new basic vocabulary

  • Fairly accurate spelling

2

Developing



  • Many simple sentences are incomplete

  • Writing does not reflect a clear understanding of the be verb (past and present), have verb, simple present/continuous, pronouns, determiners, adjectives, adverbs of frequency, negatives, word order (subject+verb+object), subject/verb agreement, punctuation, capitalization, correct spelling, and legible writing

  • Writing does not include use of new basic vocabulary

  • Spelling interferes with comprehensibility

1

Beginning



  • Most simple sentences are incomplete

  • Writing does not demonstrate an understanding of the be verb (past and present), have verb, simple present/continuous, pronouns, determiners, adjectives, adverbs of frequency, negatives, word order (subject+verb+object), subject/verb agreement, punctuation, capitalization, correct spelling, and legible writing

  • Writing does not include use of new basic vocabulary

  • Spelling interferes with comprehensibility

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Writing LEVEL 2 6/2/18



4

Exceptional




  • 1 paragraph with connected ideas

  • Paragraph includes simple and compound sentences

  • Content includes personal experience, stories about people, and is often chronologically-ordered

  • Accurate use of present simple/continuous, past simple (including irregular verbs), future, modals of ability, determiners, adjectives and adverbs, yes/no and wh-questions, there is/there are, be verb, negatives, count/non-count, and prepositions

  • Incorporates basic vocabulary

3

Competent




  • 1 paragraph with connected ideas

  • Paragraph includes simple sentences and fairly accurate compound sentences

  • Content includes personal experience and stories about people

  • Fairly accurate use of present simple/continuous, past simple (including irregular verbs), future, modals of ability, determiners, adjectives, adverbs, yes/no and wh-questions, there is/there are, be verb, negatives, count/non-count, and prepositions

  • Incorporates basic vocabulary

2

Developing



  • 1 paragraph, with poorly connected ideas

  • Writing does not include compound sentences

  • Writing does not show an awareness of sentence boundaries

  • Writing does not demonstrate a clear understanding of present simple/continuous, past simple (including irregular verbs), future, modals of ability, determiners, adjectives and adverbs, yes/no and wh-questions, there is/there are, be verb, negatives, count/non-count, and prepositions

  • Writing does not incorporate basic vocabulary

  • Frequent spelling errors

1

Beginning



  • Writing does not include compound sentences

  • Writing does not show an awareness of sentence boundaries

  • Writing does not demonstrate an understanding of present simple/continuous, past simple (including irregular verbs), future, modals of ability, determiners, adjectives and adverbs, yes/no and wh-questions, there is/there are, be verb, negatives, count/non-count, and prepositions

  • Writing does not incorporate basic vocabulary

  • Spelling errors affect comprehensibility

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Writing LEVEL 3 6/2/18



4

Exceptional




  • Write 1 paragraph, with topic sentence and support

  • Paragraph includes compound sentences and some adverbial clauses (time, because)

  • Content is based on personal experience, stories about people, and is often chronologically-ordered

  • Accurate use of present simple/continuous, past simple, future, present perfect, subject/verb agreement, comparative/superlative, and modals of request and advisability

  • Accurate sentence structure, yes/no questions, simple and compound sentences, basic word order, and punctuation

  • Vocabulary includes text-based words

3

Competent




  • Write 1 paragraph, with topic sentence and support

  • Paragraph includes compound sentences and some adverbial clauses (time, because)

  • Content is based on personal experience, stories about people, and is often chronologically-ordered

  • Most sentences include fairly accurate use of present simple/continuous, past simple, future, present perfect, subject/verb agreement, comparative/superlative, and modals of request and advisability

  • Fairly accurate sentence structure, yes/no questions, simple and compound sentences, basic word order, and punctuation

  • Vocabulary includes text-based words

2

Developing



  • Paragraph does not include topic sentence or support

  • Writing does not demonstrate a clear understanding of present simple/continuous, past simple, future, present perfect, subject/verb agreement, comparative/superlative, and modals of request and advisability

  • Writing does not demonstrate a clear understanding of sentence structure, yes/no questions, simple and compound sentences, basic word order, and punctuation

  • Many sentences are incomplete and poorly punctuated

  • Vocabulary does not include text-based words

  • Frequent spelling errors

1

Beginning



  • Paragraph does not include topic sentence or support

  • Writing does not demonstrate an understanding of present simple/continuous, past simple, future, present perfect, subject/verb agreement, comparative/superlative, and modals of request and advisability

  • Writing does not demonstrate an understanding of sentence structure, yes/no questions, simple and compound sentences, basic word order, and punctuation

  • Most sentences are incomplete and poorly punctuated

  • Vocabulary is limited and does not include text-based words

  • Spelling errors affect comprehensibility




Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Writing LEVEL 4 6/2/18



4

Exceptional




  • Ability to write 1 lengthy paragraph with clear topic sentence and relevant supporting details written in logical order

  • Content goes beyond personal content and shows ability to respond to content discussed in class.

  • Writing shows excellent control of grammar, mechanics and vocabulary

  • Writing includes all simple tenses, as well as present and past progressive tenses and present perfect tense

  • Writing shows ability to connect ideas with transitions, use of compound sentences and basic adverbial clauses

  • Sentences are complete and correctly punctuated

  • Vocabulary is becoming more varied

  • Some rhetorical structures are used at a paragraph or sentence level (i.e. narrative, descriptive, process, opinion)

  • Drafting shows evidence of ability to edit own writing

3

Competent




  • Paragraph has a topic sentence and relevant supporting details in coherent order

  • Content goes beyond personal content and shows ability to respond to content discussed in class.

  • Writing shows effective control of grammar, mechanics and vocabulary

  • Writing includes all simple tenses, as well as present and past progressive tenses and present perfect tense

  • Writing shows ability to connect ideas with transitions, and some use of compound sentences and basic adverbial clauses

  • Sentences are mostly complete and correctly punctuated

  • Some rhetorical structures are used at a paragraph or sentence level (i.e. narrative, descriptive, process, opinion)

  • Drafting shows evidence of ability to edit own writing

2

Developing



  • Paragraph lacks a clear topic sentence or relevant supporting details

  • Content rarely goes beyond personal content and shows little ability to coherently respond to content discussed in class.

  • Writing has many errors in grammar, mechanics and vocabulary

  • Writing does not go beyond simple tenses

  • Writing shows little ability to connect ideas with transitions, and weak use of compound sentences and basic adverbial clauses

  • Many sentences are incomplete and incorrectly punctuated

  • Drafting shows little evidence of ability to edit own writing

1

Beginning



  • Paragraph lacks a topic sentence. Support is weak or irrelevant.

  • Content rarely goes beyond personal content and shows little ability to coherently respond to content discussed in class.

  • Writing shows significant errors in grammar, mechanics and vocabulary

  • Writing does not go beyond simple tenses

  • Writing shows little ability to connect ideas with transitions, and no use of compound sentences and basic adverbial clauses

  • Most sentences are incomplete and incorrectly punctuated

  • Drafting shows no evidence of ability to edit own writing

Grammar that is covered in this level but may not appear in students’ writing: passive voice, past perfect, adjective clauses, and noun clauses

Shoreline Community College ESL Rubrics DRAFT

Writing LEVEL 5 6/2/18





4

Exceptional




  • Ability to write one lengthy paragraph to 2-3 connected paragraphs with clear purpose and awareness of audience

  • Writing is well organized, fully developed, and shows varied use of supporting details

  • Content goes beyond personal content and shows ability to respond to content discussed in class

  • Writing shows excellent control of grammar, mechanics and vocabulary

  • Writing includes all past tenses, ability to make time shifts, connecting ideas with transitions, use of compound and basic complex clauses (adverbial, noun, adjective)

  • Sentences are complete and correctly punctuated

  • Vocabulary is becoming more sophisticated

  • Rhetorical structures are used at a paragraph or sentence level (i.e. narrative, descriptive, process, compare and contrast, basic cause and effect, opinion)

  • Drafting shows evidence of ability to edit own writing

3

Competent




  • Ability to write 1 lengthy paragraph or 2-3 connected paragraphs with clear purpose and awareness of audience

  • Writing is organized, developed, and shows appropriate use of supporting details

  • Content goes beyond personal content and shows ability to respond to content discussed in class

  • Writing shows effective control of grammar, mechanics and vocabulary

  • Writing includes sufficient use of past tenses, connecting ideas with transitions, and use of compound and basic complex clauses (adverbial, noun, adjective)

  • Sentences are usually complete and correctly punctuated

  • Vocabulary is becoming more sophisticated

  • Some rhetorical structures are used at a paragraph or sentence level (i.e. narrative, descriptive, process, compare and contrast, basic cause and effect, opinion)

  • Drafting shows evidence of ability to edit own writing

2

Developing



  • Ability to write 1 lengthy paragraph or 2-3 connected paragraphs

  • Writing is organized and somewhat developed, but lacks clarity and/or coherence

  • Content rarely goes beyond personal content; content rarely includes detailed response to ideas discussed in class

  • Writing shows weak control of grammar, mechanics and vocabulary

  • Writing only includes use of simple tenses and shows little ability to connect ideas with transitions

  • Complex and compound sentences are rarely used

  • Sentences are often incomplete and incorrectly punctuated

  • Drafting shows little evidence of ability to edit own writing

1

Beginning



  • Writing lacks clear organization and has significant errors in grammar

  • Ideas are undeveloped

  • Writing does not go beyond personal or basic content

  • Writing shows significant errors in grammar, mechanics and vocabulary

  • Sentences are often incomplete and incorrectly punctuated

Grammar that is covered in this level but may not appear in students’ writing: reported speech, conditional clauses, and participial phrases.


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